by HopefulMonster » Sun Jul 05, 2020 11:40:39 pm
Hey Blu!
Wanted to give feedback on your farm design to help you move towards approval.
Firstly, the name is a combo of two existing things in the game. Royals, like the Royal Fairy children, and Harlequin. This is going to be more than a little confusing for folks, I would strongly suggest coming up with a different name.
Secondly, you have them with the eye marking of a Snarler. That's fine, but the eye marking and snoot marking are a set of markings that go together for that breed. Their markings aren't even a card trait, so you cannot differentiate between wanting PART of the marking but not the other.
The Omega version lists Leaper face markings. The art is showing incorrect face markings for a leaper. The Alpha does NOT list Leaper markings, but is showing two dots above the eye. What are these, and where did they come from? Again, you cannot pick and choose what portion of a trait you want, IE wanting two leaper eye dots instead of the full line of them.
You mention a "White squiggle line woth 3 red dots on one ear".
This is not an existing Trait, and designing a breed does not allow tou to invent new Traits/markings. (See previus Breed design contests to give an idea of rules)
Lastly, the Denied traits do not mention growler head/muzzle shape. Its a pretty definitive shape, so you need to mention that in denied traits if you are going for snarler head and muzzle shape.
I think that's everything!